Darkness at my feet. Heart pounding. Shadows tease me. I’m frozen. My mind Whisper lies. Holding my breath. Dare I? The Light switch is in there. Ruunn for it…
This week Write On Edge invited writers to compose a text–160
characters–that would either elicit or express fear.
Note to reader: I do not know what terrified me more this moment or writing this post. Yes I said writing this post. You would think being the texting, tweeting mad woman I am that 160 characters would be a simple…aheemmm I did. HaHa I was wrong!…I suppose I could have written a fear prompt on writing this prompt! I can not wait to read the others posts and learn from there writing…I’m taking notes!
That moment of being frozen before needing to run…so scary!
Perfect scary topic and loved the pacing you wrote it. The short staccato sentences really lend themselves to her rapid heartbeats…and your reader’s too! :>
You did good! I can sense her fear.